Feedback from Jim

Today we got some feedback from two film type people. They came into our lesson and gave us some feedback on our opening sequences. Jim looked at mine and here is what he said:

• Could the music be looped through the part of the film in present day?
• Different zooms and shots to make the film more abstract
• The "500 Years Later" thing should be in the same font
• Maybe change the present day footage so it is more abstract, maybe black and white? More contrast?